The Toll by Cherie Priest is southern gothic horror that leaves out the essential piece of a horror story. The creature, the myth, the monster…the horror.
Summary
“…The radio didn’t have any music. It only had a voice, whispering harsh and slow.
…the things I take…
Dave flailed for the knob, but it moved under his fingers like a planchette on a Ouija board. It found the spot it wanted, and it spoke again.
…are mine to keep…
‘But you didn’t take me. You didn’t catch me. You didn’t keep me,’ he said to the radio, or to whoever was speaking through it. Whatever was speaking. He didn’t know if he was right or not, or if the speaker could hear him, but he swore at it anyway. He threw the Jeep back into gear and said, ‘Fuck this.’
But as Dave sped into Betty and Boomer’s wake, back toward Staywater, the voice rasped again. This things I take are mine to keep…”
Titus and Melanie Bell are on their honeymoon, planning to canoe in the Okefenokee Swamp, driving along State Road 177 in Georgia. Along the way they cross over six bridges and when they come to the seventh bridge, a rickety thing with only room for one vehicle to cross, reality begins to change. When Titus awakes he is on the ground outside the car and Melanie is no where in sight. As he searches and calls for help the police come and then they tell Titus, there is no seventh bridge.
In the quiet and strange little town of Staywater, the residents know that every thirteen years someone goes missing. That the swamp or whatever lives there takes someone. The two old women who live with a young teenage boy thought they had killed it but it seems to have returned. The young barmaid and the boyfriend she saved from it, the last time it appeared knows that it is back. Even the police know that something takes people in the swamp and yet no one seems to know just what it is or how to kill it.
What they do know is that it is back and it is ready to feed again.
Review
This may be the most unfulfilling horror book I have read in a long time. It is full of cliches and questions with no answers and when it does offer one up, it only leads to so many more questions. As for the thing under the bridge, it never does really say what it is. As for how two old women came to raise a young man who as a child just showed up on their doorstep, how did he just show up and just what is his role in all of this? Are those two old women witches or something more? The young barmaid who traded in her young cousin to the thing under the bridge to save the life of a handsome young man who barely notices her. And what is she exactly? Another witch or something more?
The Toll feels like a second installment in a Trilogy but we are missing book one that sets all this up. And come one, a creature who comes out every generation or so to feed on the innocent? I am so over “IT”.
Pass on this one.
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